SMARTY: I love reading all your comments, especially the comments that have been written by children who have worked extremely hard on making sure their comments make sense and are punctuated correctly.
Have a go at the activity above by clicking on it. Then edit these sentences in the comments section. Every sentence needs at least one correction. You also know Miss Cox's rules about the word, "said". So you better change it quick!
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line" said george.
2. "Now,""I hope you have learnt your lesson" said carlys mum clearly
3. "but I never have" I said "I know Aaron knows how" danny said.
4. "bye Tony." Joe said.
5. "OK then" I said
6. "lets give them a wash so we did."
7. "why should i" said James
8. Michael jumped up and down and said great goal mate.
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1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," whispered George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson," shouted Carly's mum clearly.
3. "But I never have," I cryed
"I know Aaron knows how," danny lied.
4. "Bye Tony," Joe screamed.
5. "OK then," I replied.
6. "lets give them a wash,"So we did.
7. "Why should I?," snaped James.
8. Michael jumped up and down and cheered "great goal mate!,"
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," laughed George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson" replied Carlys mum clearly.
3. "But I never have," I mumbled "I know Aaron knows how" danny cried.
4. "Bye Tony." Joe shouted.
5. "OK then" I whispered.
6. "Lets give them a wash, so we did."
7. "Why should I" asked James.
8. Michael jumped up and down and explained great goal mate!
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line" explaid George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson" shouted Carlys mum clearly
3. "But I never have" I repleid "I know Aaron knows how" danny told.
4. "Bye Tony." murmured Joe .
5. "OK then" I replied.
6. "lets give them a wash so we did."
7. "why should i" spoke James.
8. Michael jumped up and down and shouted "great goal mate."
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," suggested George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson," asked Carly's Mum clearly
3. "But I never have," I explained
"I know Aaron knows how," Danny added.
4. "Bye Tony," Joe shouted.
5. "Ok then," I mumbled.
6. "Lets give them a wash," Michael thought. So we did.
7. "Why should I?" cried James.
8. Michael jumped up and down and screamed "Geat goal mate!"
In my spare time I go on my Laptop,play out,go one msn or just play with my dogs!
Id really like to do is go Sky diving it looks really run and I'v never done it befor!
I really enjoy going shopping,playing with my dogs and just chilling out watching T.V.
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," whispered George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson," shouted Carlys mum clearly
3. "But I never have" I said "I know Aaron knows how," danny whined.
4. "Bye Tony." Joe waved.
5. "OK then," I sighed
6. "Lets give them a wash" So we did.
7. "why should I" disagreed James
8. Michael jumped up and down and said "great goal!"
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," commented George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learn't your lesson," explained Carly's mum clearly.
3. "But I never have," I replied. "I know,Aaron knows how," Danny wispered.
4. "Bye Tony," Joe souted.
5. "OK then," I cried.
6. "lets give them a wash,so we did," Harry advised.
7. "Why should I," James
8. Michael jumped up and down and screamed, "Great goal mate."
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," suggested George.
2. "Now,I hope you have learn't your lesson," screemed Carly's mum clearly.
3. "But I never have," I sniggered
"I know Aaron knows how," Danny protested.
4. "Bye Tony," Joe shouted.
5. "OK then," I murmured
6. "Lets give them a wash"
So we did.
7. "Why should I" growled James
8. Michael jumped up and down and cheered, "Great goal mate."
1. "Lets hang them up on the washing line," exclaimed George!
2. "Now,I hope you have learnt your lesson," shouted Carlys mum clearly.
3. "But I never have," I said.
"I know Aaron knows how," danny spoke.
4. "Bye Tony," Joe whispered.
5. "OK then," I screamed!
6. "lets give them a wash, so we did."
7. "Why should I," asked James?
8. Michael jumped up and down and said,"Great goal mate!"
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